The Price of Breathing Reviewed 🎊

So pleased that reviews are rolling in for my forthcoming book, The Price of Breathing, that releases on September 15th (next month!), including this marvelous one from The Reading Bud. 😊🎊

An excerpt: “Author Faith could easily have reduced this premise to a conventional love triangle, but she does something far more intelligent and compassionate. Helen’s jealousy is neither mocked nor treated as selfishness; Flora’s illness does not render all her desires automatically innocent; and Harry’s decision to go is both generous and emotionally complicated. Even Gus, Flora’s husband, gradually emerges as a affecting figure rather than an obstacle placed between former lovers. By allowing Helen, Harry, Flora, Gus and several peripheral characters to speak for themselves, author Faith reminds us that the same relationship can look entirely different depending on who is remembering it, and that love, loyalty and regret seldom arrive in morally convenient forms.

The poems centred on Flora and the iron lung are the most powerful in the collection. Faith captures not only the terror of being unable to breathe independently, but also the indignities that accompany prolonged illness. The recurring lists of things Flora misses are deceptively simple and deeply moving because they make us recognise how much of life rests inside actions most of us never think to value.”

Check out the whole review here, and consider preordering today: The Price of Breathing clickety-click.

My Fifty-Word Story Published Today 🎊

Super excited that my fifty-word story was published today at 50 Give or Take. It will also appear in the yearly 50 Give or Take anthology. Read my story below, subscribe to get a daily delivery of a story to your inbox, and consider submitting your own stories. Learn more at: clickety-click.

“Stone Fruit”

Fragrant, like edible roses. I wish I’d drawn them first. I wish I’d gotten more than four.

I ate around the stones. I ate them one after another, over the sink, making happy sounds.

Truth be told, I’m standing there still, marked with sticky sweet juice as the world burns.

Melanie Faith loves film cameras and naps. Her latest book of poetry is The Price of Breathing .

"4 Ways Doodling Enriches the Writing Process"

Great news! My article with tips for doodling and writing was published today at Women on Writing! Read on for some tips and info about my online drawing class that begins Monday, August 3rd.

“4 Ways Doodling Enriches the Writing Process”

By: Melanie Faith

Like most people, when I was in elementary school, I loved art class and drawing. I always went at whatever project our art teacher, Mrs. K, assigned with gusto, if not precision. By 7th grade, art became a club by invitation only (I didn’t get the invitation) and other activities like writing and surviving as a teenager took over.

Although I didn’t talk about it much, throughout the years I always liked filling margins with shapes and signing greeting cards to friends and family with a little mini-me sketch. In the past five years, especially, I’ve started to draw more frequently as its own activity and filled pages with new artistic adventures, from oil pastels and alcohol markers to enjoying fine-liner pens, gouache, and beautiful, gifted colored pencils.   

How does doodling enhance our experience as writers?

Showing up for Ourselves: There is something refreshing about a low-outcome or no-expectation activity. Like walking, running, hiking, cycling, gardening, and other physical activities where the point is most often showing up, putting in practice, and enjoying the time that is separate from the to-do list, drawing also encourages us to grab a time and show up for it—and for ourselves in a way that is often shoved aside in daily life’s deadlines and expectations. Both drawing and writing tap into a relaxed state we seldom feel in our rushed everyday lives where responsibilities and obligations stack up. Showing up for our art and seeing what comes of it can be the best gift we give ourselves.

Experiencing the Moment without Rush or Worry: When we grab a pen or pencil or brush and begin to noodle around, as I like to call it, just as when we sit before a notebook or a computer screen and begin to draft, we are opening ourselves up to a side of ourselves that responds to discovery. Whether or not the draft or sketch turns out as we like, we are practicing showing up and seeing what we can make. When we are drawing, we get to experience again what kids feel as they make things: kids don’t care yet what the end piece becomes; they just enjoy the physical and emotional experience of using the art supplies and covering the table with them and filling a page.

Perseverance or Freedom to Begin Again: I opened up my camera roll recently and chose some recent photos to doodle. I expected very little out of the sketches—mostly, it was for the joy and the practice, and to have a prompt that could help me to leap into making marks on paper quickly, without sitting to think about it for too long. Did the doodles match my photos precisely? Not at all, but precision is not my goal. In the drawing, some fingers were slightly bigger than the others in the peace sign my elder niece flashed to me in the yarn store and my younger niece’s arms under the pizza boxes were too short, and I didn’t quite pencil in the funky sunglass lenses completely on the self-portrait doodle. But does any of it matter? Nope. The hour and a half I sat outside with my little square sketchbook surrounded by art supplies, my hand and mind moving across the page, was the complete goal, and honestly, it was such fun that it felt like about ten minutes. I was surprised to look at my watch and discover it had been well over an hour.

We can put a lot of pressure on ourselves for the first sketches or the first drafts to be beautiful or remarkable, and yet, it’s a great reminder in both arts to invest without expectation of outcome. Also, we  learn when we’d like to continue and when starting over is best. Some drawings surprise me that even if they don’t look objectively great, if I keep finessing them, they can become something remarkable anyway. Or it’s just time to scrap and try again, no penalty. If what I draw starts off wonky and keeps going astray, I can just give a chuckle and turn to the next page. Either way, the experience in knowing when and how to continue or to laugh it off and begin afresh serves well in both drawing and writing (and dare I say? Also in life).

Fulfillment. This one needs little explanation. When I’ve been meaning to write or to draw or photograph for a while but haven’t gotten around to it, I start to feel…deflated, agitated, and distracted.  Once I’ve given myself the gift of a few minutes or an hour making something, I feel more content. I’m just happier when making new things; maybe you are, too.

Try this exercise:  Give yourself 20 minutes today that you hadn’t expected and shower yourself with attention, by which I mean: grab a piece of blank paper or a notebook and make some marks, weather that’s a squiggly doodle you shade in, a few sentences about your day so far or your day yesterday, a stanza of a poem, or something else. Need inspo? Give your camera roll a spin and stop on an image that speaks to you. After your 20 minutes do a self-inventory: How do you feel? Are your shoulders more relaxed and less tight? How does your spine feel, and your breathing? Do you feel as if it’s been 20 minutes or a lot less? Repeat this exercise again later in the week and as often as you’d like. 😊

Care to learn more? I’ve got a class for you: Doodling Class clickety-click.

Love to Doodle? Have I Got a Class for You! ✍️

Have you always liked to doodle? Wish you could draw more in a low-key, freeing, self-directed way? Like making marks on the page for the pleasure of it? Now that summer has arrived, I’m super excited to share that I’ll be teaching a super fun online class in August. I’d love to work with you and a friend; mark your calendars. Sign-ups now open. 🥳

Here’s the scoop on my new four-week class, Drawing Doodle Comics for Fun and Enrichment: clickety-click.

Class description: COURSE DESCRIPTION:

Love to doodle or draw but haven’t drawn for a while? Or want to learn a new skill that is rich in narrative and creativity-building skills? Find comics entertaining and interesting? Want to depict memorable small moments from your own life or a character’s life for the joy of recording memories and everyday absurdities that amuse you? Or learn a few techniques that pleasantly blur the lines between drawing and diary? If the answer is yes to any of these questions, welcome aboard!

Nonfiction comics are a delightful blend of story compression, dialogue, drawings, and theme. Comics are an ever-malleable form that can encompass journal entries, a comic strip, experimentation with writing about the self as a character, and so much more.

Photography Published at Flowers of the Field! 🥳

Excellent artistic news! I’ve had a poem and photography published at the most recent issue of Flowers of the Field! From delicious, decadent chocolates to flowers to spools of thread and more, it’s a pleasure to get to share these shots from my camera. 📸Their next issue has a “joy” themed: clickety-click for guidelines. To this continued creative life!

Exciting News! Cover Reveal and Pre-Order Link! 💃

Super delighted to get to share the gorgeous cover for my latest poetry collection, The Price of Breathing.

Read more about the book’s plot and pre-order today at this link: Clickety-click to Vine Leaves Press!

Can’t wait to share this book for its book birthday in September, and many thanks to Vine Leaves Press and multitalented publisher Jessica Bell for this amazing cover design. I couldn’t be happier! Catch more of Jessica’s fabulous designs—I heartily recommend her work if you’re looking for a book designer or have a friend who is.

My Short Story Published at Grande Dame Literary & Art Journal 🥳

Thrilled to announce that my short story, “Mama’s Favorite,” was published at Grande Dame Literary & Art Journal. ✍️

Here’s an opening excerpt:

"She wanted you to have it,” Randall says. He holds it out, between us.

What can you say to that?

I move my hip from blocking the doorway. “Come in,” I say.

I let him scooch around me. He looks really good—he’s lost a few pounds and just had a haircut. And he smells even better: woodsy, warm, and clean. I can’t take a chance he’ll “accidentally” touch his hand against mine in the hand-over.

The cutting board is made of walnut. I already have two: one I got for my first apartment before we met, one I got when I cleaned out Nan’s house, but I don’t tell Randall that. I flash back to the first Thanksgiving we went over to Mama Lainie’s. She put me to work paring and dicing the celery, which was a relief because that’s about all I knew how to do. Mama Lainie was always great that way—she could size you up without making you feel weird about it and place you exactly where you’d do your best work.

Randall sits it on the counter next to the juicer.

“You got new Formica,” he says. Never content to just let it be. “When’d you get that?”

Clickety-click to read it all (and check out the other amazing stories they publish): here

Photo courtesy of Debbie Widjaja on Unsplash free-stock

My Poem Featured 😊👍

Such a joy to be part of my friend Lee Ann Berardi Smith’s wonderful videos that celebrate National Poetry Month! Lee Ann has shared other poems of mine going back to the early days of the pandemic, and it’s such a pleasure to hear her read from my work.

Check out this video, where she reads my poem, “Matteo Runs Ahead,” as well as her other fantastic videos celebrating the art of poetry and many talented poets this month.

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Free-stock Photo courtesy of Daiji Umemoto on Unsplash

Far Villages Poetry-Craft Anthology--April Sale! 🥳

A few years ago, I had the great pleasure of being included in a wonderful poetry craft-essay volume, called Far Villages: Welcome Essays for New & Beginner Poets. The volume was edited by talented Abayomi Animashaun through the marvelous Black Lawrence Press.

If you’re a poet, an educator, an interested reader who wants to learn more about the poetic craft, and/or are looking for a gift that’s sure to bring much inspiration to the poets in your life, I highly recommend this anthology. It’s the kind of book you’ll want to keep on a close shelf to page through for motivation and ideas.

Get your copy now—it’s on sale through this month while supplies last. Clickety-click! Write on!

Great April News: Publication of "It's the Kind of Thing" 🎊

Cotton-candy-colored blossoms and publication: sweet treats of April

So pleased to share that my nature poem. “It’s the Kind of Thing,” has been published in the current, April issue of The Bluebird Word.

Here are the opening lines, and clickety click to read the rest. Also, check out the work of the marvelous, talented fellow writers in the issue, including dear friend Antonia Albany’s wonderful Spent Water Balloons.

To this continued writing life! ✍️

“It’s the Kind of Thing”

if I wrote it you might
not believe me, but I’ll
write it anyway.

For a second, I mistook
riffs of an electric guitar
on the radio
of a passing car

for a stray cat or kitten
and looked up
from my book
for a tail and a lean cat needing care.

Read the rest and the entire issue at: The Bluebird Word.